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Boosting the power of your email subject lines is the best way for most people to boost the effectiveness of their emails. It\u2019s a focus of my email presentations<\/a>.<\/p>\n

In this post, I share subject-line tips from The Hamster Revolution: Stop Info-Glut\u2014Reclaim Your Life!<\/a><\/em> by Mike Song, Vicki Halsey, and Tim Burress. Some of their suggestions may be most useful to team members who email each other frequently.<\/p>\n

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Start email subject lines with these keywords<\/h2>\n

The Hamster Revolution<\/em> suggests starting your email subject lines with words that define their category. \u201cThese categories build context and rapid comprehension for your reader,\u201d say the authors.<\/p>\n

Here are the category words recommended by the authors:<\/p>\n

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  1. Action<\/li>\n
  2. Confirmed<\/li>\n
  3. Delivery<\/li>\n
  4. Info<\/li>\n
  5. Request<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n

    1. Action and 5. Request<\/h3>\n

    The authors don\u2019t say when to use \u201cAction\u201d instead of \u201cRequest.\u201d I see the two as overlapping. Either word could start a subject line saying \u201chelp George to prepare plan.\u201d In my opinion, you can drop \u201cAction\u201d in favor of \u201cRequest,\u201d which is #5 on their list.<\/p>\n

    2. Confirmed<\/h3>\n

    \u201cConfirmed\u201d can precede the details of an appointment or agreement. For example, \u201cConfirmed: Oct. 15, 3 p.m. meeting.\u201d<\/p>\n

    3. Delivery<\/h3>\n

    The meaning of \u201cdelivery\u201d in an email subject line isn\u2019t immediately clear. For this reason, it\u2019s most appropriate for use with members of your team after you train them in its meaning.<\/p>\n

    Here\u2019s how Hamster Revolution<\/em> defines it:<\/p>\n

    Delivery is used when you\u2019re responding to a specific request. It\u2019s your way of saying \u201cI\u2019m delivering exactly what you requested.\u201d<\/p>\n

    4. Info<\/h3>\n

    To me, \u201cInfo\u201d signals that an email simply provides information; it doesn\u2019t require a reply. If I\u2019m waiting for that information, I quickly realize that the sender has satisfied my needs. On the other hand, I may be able to file the email without reading it. That\u2019s a time-saver.<\/p>\n

    I\u2019m more likely to use FYI than \u201cInfo,\u201d but either is fine.<\/p>\n

    Handy abbreviations<\/h2>\n

    Abbreviations can help teams to communicate more efficiently. When I led an investment communications tea m at an investment management firm, we used \u201cEOM.\u201d As I discussed in \u201cFit it in your subject line EOM<\/a>,\u201d EOM appears at the end of the subject line and is short for \u201cend of message.\u201d It means that there\u2019s no need to open the email because the entire message appears in the subject line.<\/p>\n

    The Hamster Revolution<\/em> suggests two more subject line abbreviations:<\/p>\n